Saturday, May 1, 2010

In the aftermath

In the Aftermath (if you have time, would love to hear which version you prefer)

sometimes it is just living
into the small graces that gets us through:
raindrops on the window,
light from a streetlamp in the misty evening,
memories of hands held in love....
we are who we were meant to be


or


sometimes it is just living
into the small graces that gets us through:
raindrops on the window,
light from a streetlamp in the misty evening,
memories of hands held in love....
wanderers into life's mysteries
passers-by in the stream of embodiment
remembering
we are who we were meant to be

7 comments:

  1. yeah, me, too, as my friend Dex said. First instincts (I think that's the word he used) are often the best!

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  2. Only I like #2 better! What to make of that?

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  3. well, I guess that's why they make chocolate and vanilla!

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  4. Hey marcia!! I am new here and guess what???? I vote for a mixture!! (always did like that chocolate and vanilla swirl cone)
    But what i would like best is #1 but add the line "remembering" before the "we are who we were meant to be"
    So there you go!!!!
    XXOO
    Nancy

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